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Dodo's Revenge 2
 
Written by: SilverYoshi
 
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Chapter 1 : Dodo gets captured

 


    One sunny day, Dodo was walking along a dirt road. He starts talking to himself…
    DODO: *sighs* Well, at least Valentina won't bother me for a while…
    At that moment, Valentina walks onto the screen and is in plain view.
    VALENTINA: Were you talking about me? Why don't you join me in a war against Mario and his friends?
    DODO: Why should I help you?
    Valentina takes out a gun.
    VALENTINA: Because I could shoot you if you don't *smirk*
    DODO: *gulps*
    Dodo walks silently with Valentina to her fortress in Nimbus Land. Valentina then speaks.
    VALENTINA: Now, If you are a good bird, and you DON'T pull any funny stuff, I might just treat you nice for once. If you are a bad bird, I'll just have to let you starve to death.
    DODO: Yes, Valentina.
    VALENTINA: That's Queen Valentina to you, Dodo.
    DODO: Yes, Queen Valentina.
    VALENTINA: That's better.
    A few days later, Mario and his friends show up. Valentina is waiting up in her tower.
    VALENTINA: Dodo! Get over here! We have company!
    DODO: *to himself* Great, just what I need. *To Valentina* Coming!
    Dodo walks into Valentina's room.
    DODO: Yeah? You wanted me?
    VALENTINA: Yes, I did want you. I want you to entertain Mario and his butt-ugly friends.
    DODO: okay. *To himself* Why doesn't she get off her own lazy butt for once?
    Dodo walks out of the castle, really pissed off, and throws Mario off a cliff.
    PEACH: Mario!
    Peach commits suicide by diving off the cliff that Mario just got thrown off of.
    DODO: anybody else want some?
    Everybody runs away terrified.
    DODO: That's what I thought. That was too easy.
    Dodo walks in Valentina's room and tells her about the news.
    DODO: They're gone!
    VALENTINA: That was fast. Faster then anything you would normally do, since you're so slow and fat.
    DODO: Hey! I'm not slow and fat, you ugly witch!
    VALENTINA: How dare you call me an ugly witch! GUARDS!!
    Two Guards walk in the room.
    GUARD#1: Yes, Queen Valentina?
    VALENTINA: Take him to the Dungeon!
    GUARD#2: It would be our pleasure Ma'am.
    Both guards grab dodo. He struggles to free himself, but the guards are too strong.
    DODO: Let me go, you idiots!
    GUARD#1: Sorry, chubby, but Valentina's order's were to throw you in the Dungeon.
    DODO: You listen to that freak?!
    GUARD#2: We are entirely loyal to our Queen!
    DODO: How could you listen to that retard?
    GUARD#1: It's fun to be evil, and we can't do anything by ourselves.
    DODO: *mumbles* Proves how stupid you are…
    They reach the Dungeon and the guards throw Dodo in the first cell, which already holds a prisoner. The prisoner is a red bird.
    DODO: Hello. Who are you?
    ???: My name's Fawkes. I'm a Phoenix.
    DODO: I'm Dodo.
    FAWKES: Nice to meet you, Dodo.
    DODO: So, how did you get in here?
    FAWKES: I was eavesdropping on Valentina to see what her next plan was. She already destroyed my home. I heard something about someone named Mallow…
    DODO: oh, I remember him. He was on Mario's team. But Mario died recently.
    FAWKES: *holds back a laugh* How?
    DODO: I got mad at Valentina and threw him off a cliff.
    FAWKES: What got you thrown in here?
    DODO: I talked back to Valentina.
    FAWKES: Don't feel bad; Many people make that same mistake.
    DODO: I wish I could get out of here. *sighs* There's nothing I can do. Now I'm going stay in here until Valentina needs a new throw pillow…
    FAWKES: Don't worry. I know a way out of here. See that rock over there?
    DODO: Yeah…
    FAWKES: If you move that rock, You'll be on the other side of Nimbus Land!
    DODO: cool.
    FAWKES: Let's get out of here while the guards are taking their break!
    DODO: sure! I could live with that.
    

 
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